Spoiler Alert: It's great!!
Peppered with moments of political satire and heartfelt introspection, Stephens’s novel also offers a fun-house depiction of the absurdities and horrors of the surveillance state. This is an excellent debut.
Read the full review here: Publisher's Weekly
Hi, I’m Alice Stephens. I’m a newbie to Pitch Wars, but I’m not new to writing. Like many of you, I knew from an early age that I wanted to be a writer, and have been scribbling away since I learned how to grip a pencil. I’ll try to keep things short, not because I don’t want to take up your time—I’m a writer, I like the attention—but because I’ve included lots of links so you can find out more about me.
Please take a look around the rest of my website, where you will find a short bio, a description of my forthcoming novel, Famous Adopted People, and links to some things I wrote about books, reading, writing and publishing. Most of my pieces appear in the Washington Independent Review of Books, where I am a regular book reviewer and a columnist. As your mentor, I will encourage you to seek out opportunities to publish short pieces to begin building your platform and making connections, and we can brainstorm article ideas and where to submit.
Other things about me: My first (still unpublished) novel and my WIP are historical fiction. I get my best ideas swimming. I sincerely believe that my dog is the cutest dog in the whole world. Just take a look at him. Judge for yourself.
What I Am Looking For
In a manuscript: My genre is literary fiction. Just what exactly do I mean by literary fiction? To borrow Justice Potter Stewart’s famous definition of pornography, “I know it when I see it.” Examples of literary fiction can be found in all genres: Science Fiction (Frankenstein), Speculative Fiction (The Handmaid’s Tale), Horror (The Haunting of Hill House), Ghost Story (Beloved), Graphic Novel (Fun House), Historical Fiction (Pachinko), Romance (anything by Jane Austen), Thrillers (A Map of Betrayal), Detective Novels (Motherless Brooklyn), Humor (A Confederacy of Dunces)…
In literary fiction, prose, structure, and message take precedence over plot. While plot is important, it is but a vehicle to showcase the writer’s strong voice, distinctive wordsmithing, unique viewpoint, and subtly wrought themes.
To give you a better sense of books that I have liked and why, please see these reviews: A Separation by Katie Kitamura; Anything is Possible by Elizabeth Strout; Exit West by Mohsin Hamid; The Fortunes by Peter Ho Davies; The Exact Nature of Our Wrongs by Janet Peery; The Buddha in the Attic by Julie Otsuka; A Tale for the Time Being by Ruth Ozeki; The Twelve Tribes of Hattie by Ayana Mathis; and The Orphan Master’s Son by Adam Johnson.
In a writer: Ideally, I am looking for a writer who feels like she was born to write the work she is submitting (though I use feminine pronouns, I absolutely welcome submissions from all genders). I want a strong, assured voice and an authentic story.
As an adoptee, I was frustrated at the recent wave of novels about transracial adoption which were not written by adoptees and which sometimes trafficked in clichés, whereas my own adoption novel could not find a publisher. I would love to mentor someone with a manuscript that similarly defies accepted conventions on her subject matter, and to work together to shape it into something that will appeal to agents and editors while staying true to her own voice.
I want a writer who is confident in her own story and her right to tell it. I want exceptional prose, an unusual story, and an authorial sense of mission.
E-mail, always. I’ll reply promptly, even if it’s just to say that a full response is forthcoming. I’m a regular visitor to social media, but I don’t live there. I am deathly allergic to GIFs.
Pros and Cons
Pros: As a prolific book reviewer, I know how to critique a book. Having taken a very long and winding road to publication, I have a lot of insights to share about the journey. The query letter will be the easy part—I’ve landed two agents and my book deal with query letters.
Cons: The hard part is the revision, and I might ask more of you than you want to give. I’m a blunt critic with high standards. I’m a newcomer to Pitch Wars, and am not that active on social media.
My goal is the same as yours, to work hard on your manuscript, polishing it into a thing of beauty that will be irresistible to that one, special agent. In my experience, that means revisions, revisions, and more revisions, so if you’re ready to spend long, lonely hours toiling over your novel, I’m ready to help you.
Thanks for reading. Investigate the other adult mentor wishlists below or return to the Pitch Wars Mentor Blog Hop.
Famous Adopted People gets its first review from Kirkus, and I’m delighted it’s a positive one!
A biting critique of identity that lampoons genetic ties and ethnic stereotypes.
This is the submission letter that landed me a book deal. Every publication story is unique. Mine is about an agent who went above and beyond, subbing the manuscript on five different rounds, to resounding rejection. I asked her to send it out to one more indie press, but she (understandably) declined, so I sent the manuscript out on my own.Read more